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I would love to see a plan or section to really clue in how this isn't and you'll forgive me but a house boat. I'm also curious about the structure and if you had to consider it. I ask b/c the model shows that the house is sitting on what look like massive what I assume concrete foundations. Well what if the architecture became the structure? Those flaps you added, I'm really not sold on them but if they became a portion of the strucutre I would be sold. Maybe the bottom floor goes down to the grade which isn't a real big stretch considering the grade is not much further down. The circles that create a portion of the skin is interesting and I am curious about it.
As a conceptual idea I think it works, boats and water. I think however something is missing and I'm not even sure what it is. Its bold to take a concept of a boat and do representational architecture. I personally don't like that as I am incredibly abstract with my architecture but I can respect it. Forgive me if it sounds harsh but i'm just a fellow architect and for the sake of it, what did your critic/jury say about it?